Part 36 ‘Hummingbird’ – Connection Concealed Excerpt (Community Perk)

Heya!

Happy New Year!

You didn’t really think I was going to let you wait 5 whole days into 2019 to get your hands on some part of the next episode, right? You know I like to share with my fellow romantics. 😉

Hope you enjoy!

Sigrid

 

“Excuse me,” Louise grumbled.The woman standing in her path looked up from under her brightly colored hat. Her expression changed from annoyance to admiration in the blink of an eye.

She stepped aside. “Oh, I’m sorry, officer.”

Louise nodded and stepped past her.

“At least I look like a Fireblue official,” she thought. Without the bandana, she felt exposed. Recognizing her was easy.

So much so, she had considered changing her outfit entirely. She had kept listing the pros and cons in the car for hours. That’s how long it had taken her to find the B2 power plant.

She had heard on the radio what time El would arrive. The excited host had also mentioned a large audience was expected at the opening of the new power facility.

That’s when Louise had started to doubt if it was wise to keep posing as a Fireblue presidential guard. Maybe it was better to blend into the audience as a citizen?

She would have needed another outfit, though. The biggest issue, however, was that she wouldn’t have been able to bring the gun.

And so, here she was, trying to make her way through the crowd, still wearing the Fireblue cap and coat and firmly holding on to the gun. There were more people than she had expected.

They were gathered on a large square in the middle of the new site. The plant itself was on the right. A smaller building stood at the front of the square, behind the temporary stage.

On any other day, Louise would have marveled at her surroundings. The plant was clearly state of the art. Its location, on the top of a hill, provided a stunning view of the ocean.

She squinted. The harsh morning light was brutal on her tired eyes. She spotted police and presidential guards pretty much everywhere around the square.

She wouldn’t be able to keep avoiding them. At some point, she would have to bring on her A game and bluff her way past them. For now, she would keep her distance.

She studied the stage. There was a lectern in the middle of it with a small seating area for guests behind it. A canine unit was inspecting the chairs.

Louise thought of Stucky and smiled sadly. She pulled down the zipper of her coat. She needed some room to breathe. The crisp, early morning air was long gone.

The smaller, brick building behind the podium looked like some sort of office. Louise guessed that’s where El would wait before giving her speech. She rubbed the back of her neck.

Looking back up, Louise caught a young woman glancing over at her. A kid holding a teddy bear was clinging on to her hand and staring at Louise too. Louise cleared her throat.

She had hoped being in the audience would give her some extra cover, but it was doing the exact opposite. She was drawing too much attention to herself. There were about twenty minutes left before El’s speech would start. Louise couldn’t just stand here.

She bumped into someone’s backpack as she began to walk away.

“Oh sorry,” the teenager said.

His dark, brown eyes flicked in the direction of the stage and then the exit. If Louise were a real guard, he’d be on her to watch list for sure. An idea popped into her mind. She frowned and pointed at his bag.

“Hey, you, open that bag,” she commanded, sounding pretty convincing.

The guy immediately obeyed, his cheeks blushing. Louise took a peek into the backpack, seeing nothing but a rolled up sweater and a can of beer. She gave him a stern nod and moved on.

People stepped aside now. She kept her eyes on their bags and coats. “I have to behave like a soldier,” Louise thought, “I am one, after all. Just from the wrong army.”

She asked a few more people to open their bags. She kept her expression stony, her voice low. It was good to have a task, even if it was a fake one. It kept her from freaking out.

She had come here without knowing if El had gotten her message. And even if El had found the scribblings on the bandana, would she believe her?

Had Louise’s message been convincing enough? Would El even consider what Louise had suggested she should do? Or was Woodward’s power over her too strong?

Louise would not find out until El took that stage. Just thinking about it made her hands sweaty. Not exactly a good thing when you’re holding a gun and are planning to use it.

 

Alright, time to pause until Saturday… See you then?

11 responses to “Part 36 ‘Hummingbird’ – Connection Concealed Excerpt (Community Perk)”

  1. Marcie53 Avatar
    Marcie53

    On my way to checking when is the next part out! I could see this vividly in my mind. What a great movie it would be.

    1. zizichan Avatar
      zizichan

      Totally! All three stories would do really well as movies! 💪🏻 We should help Sigrid with the casting tasks 😜

      1. JennyT Avatar
        JennyT

        Great idea! Can Sigourney Weaver please make a cameo appearance as Monique Biden – perhaps a flashback scene or two! 😋

        1. zizichan Avatar
          zizichan

          Oooh! That sounds great!! I am having a hard time thinking who could play Louise and El… Let’s bring suggestions to the table! 😉

          1. JennyT Avatar
            JennyT

            Emma Stone has my vote to play El (Still thinking about Louise)

        2. Sigrid Avatar
          Sigrid

          Muriel approves of this casting idea, haha!

          1. zizichan Avatar
            zizichan

            Yay! So we have a green light from Muriel! Hmmmm… I have been thinking: As El, perhaps, Saoirse Ronan, and as Louise, maybe Gal Gadot. [Emma Stone would a great Leah, JennyT (and Amber Heard could be Emily). Amy Adams could play a good Hannah, btw, and as Milly… Amanda Seyfried, maybe. But these are just preliminary thoughts… Waiting for more suggestions from the fellow romantic community!!] … Sigrid, if you give us a green light too, next thing you’ll know is the date of the premiere for each movie!! 😉👏🏻👏🏻

            1. JennyT Avatar
              JennyT

              Amanda Seyfreid as Milly is PERFECT 👏👏
              Kristin Stewart as Hannah??

  2. jdavis Avatar
    jdavis

    My heart rate is up!!!

  3. root Avatar
    root

    My mental image of Louise is Tasha from The L Word. And maybe Amy Acker for El…

  4. Milly2220 Avatar
    Milly2220

    jessica chastain Possible Hanna I totally agree with Amanda for Milly. Emmmaa Stone yes please 🙂

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